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2 comments:
The tracking on the body copy in the bottom one is a buggin' me. Way too much space in spots. I think, if your gonna justify it, you'll have to increase the font size. Or maybe increase the graphic at type. I dunno. Looks like you're just trying to fill too much space thur. :P
critique 'wanted poster':
Honestly i think the execution of this design is really great! The typography is killer, and the vector image works quite well!
so from a text book this is just right! its a very good design.
I'm sure anyone would agree with that, but heres the thing... the killer thing about graphic design is that you really have no limits! so why settle for something as generic as a 'wanted poster' google search 'wanted poster' and you'll find 715,000 image results of joke wanted posters...
you really have to push it if you want something thats going to make people do more then just go 'oh thats clever because its been done 715,000 times before...' be creative about being creative...
so push it to the next level, its a good idea, but it takes that next step to make it a great idea!
good luck!
look forward to seeing the final copy!
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